Nurul Fadillah-Essay Cause Effects

1.      Essay yang membahas penyebab :

Car Accidents

            Nowadays, there’re so many car accidents happen all over the place.  It is such a very dangerous kind of accident because often times it cause death.  There are several factors that make a car accident to happen.

            First, losing the concentration during the drive.  What make the drivers lose their concentration is that they are not in good conditions.  It needs a high concentration to drive a car safely.  However, if the drivers in bad conditions for example they’re sleepy, sick or the worse they get drunk, those conditions would make them lost their concentration even lost their consciousness.  Thus, the drivers who are in those conditions have a very high potential to have a car accident. 

            Second, it is caused by many unskilled and indiscipline drivers.  To be allowed to drive a car we should have a license—driving license that shows that we are qualified to drive a car well.  Nevertheless, there’re so many people drive a car without a driving license. It’s very dangerous because it’s very possible that those who don’t have a driving license, they also do not have enough knowledge and ability to drive.  Less knowledge and less ability in driving leads to a serious car accident because they don’t know how to drive safely, they don’t know the rule during the drive and they don’t know how to control a car in many kind of situation.

            Third, what make the car accident happened is that there something wrong with the car such as the broken break so the driver cannot stop a car which make the car crash to happen.  Other external factor is like a bad road with so many hole on it or the bad weathers such as storm, hurricane, flood  and soon and so forth.  In those kinds of situation, it’s very difficult to drive a car safely.

            It can be seen that many car accident mostly happen because of human error.  Therefore, we have to be careful.

2.      Essay yang membahas dampak :

Obesity

            Obesity—extremely fat is one of the most serious problems that many people suffered from.  It is caused by many factors, such as consuming too many calories, unorganized life style and many more.  Obesity is very dangerous because it causes many negative effects.  Below, there are several negative effects of obesity.

            First, it causes many kind of serious diseases such as diabetes, heart attract and oppressive.  As a result, it increases the rate of death.

            Second, obesity limited the people’s activities.  It’s so hard to do many activities with an extremely fat body and usually obesity cause people to get tired easily.

            Third, the negative effect of obesity is to lose the confidence. Many people especially women dream to have a slim body.  Having slim body make them feel good and confidence. While to have a big body is a shame and bad.  That’s why, obesity  decrease people’s confidence.

            Due to the explanation above, I can conclude that we have to be careful of obesity because as we already known, it has so many negative effects.